Narrative Writing

WALT: Identify the features and structure of narrative writing

On a Saturday morning Lauren  thought her and Mary will go to a theme park for her birthday. As they walk into the theme park they see a lot of rides, “how about we try every single one of the rides” exclaimed Mary “sure” Lauren said with excitement. They only had one more ride to go before the whole things shuts down and closes, That ride was called the deadliest ride ever. Just when they hopped on they were very excited but they never knew what was in front of them, Riding right towards the broken space they could see that they were going very fast “ahhhhhhhh” Screamed  Mary and Lauren. When the operator heard them he didn't know what to do because it was his first day working at the theme park. Suddenly The operator saw a lever on a weird looking door but he didn't know what it does so he pulled it and the whole thing shutted down just in time. Helping The two best friends get down they both said “ That was the deadliest ride.”