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Friday 4 November 2016

Rewriting

WALT: - Identify features of instructional writing
            - Create instructions that are concise and easy to follow 

Instructions should have clear, simple steps so you don’t confuse the person reading them.
Can you make these various instructions easier to understand?

Pick up an egg, gently hit it against the side of a bowl and empty the contents into a clean bowl.
Get any amount of eggs.Gently hit the eggs against the side of the bowl, empty all the eggs and Put it into a nice clean bowl
Open the fridge and take out the butter. Take off the lid. Get a knife and use it to scoop some butter. Rub the knife onto the toast.
Get a tub of butter out of the fridge, Take off the lid then get a clean knife and take a little scoop of butter,butter the toast  from side to side with the butter knife
Hold the two shortest sides of paper and bend them together. Squeeze them so that the paper is now in half.
Get a piece of paper, turn it landscape and hold the shortest sides. Gently squeeze the paper so the paper can go in half.
When you hear the sound of the whistle, move one leg in front of the other as quickly as you can.
When your start to hear the sound of a whistle, Quickly move one leg in front of the other as soon as possible
When player One had rolled the die, they should hand it to player Two, who should then roll it too. The person with the highest score moves their counter first.
Once player one had rolled the die he/she should hand it to player two that will then roll it. The person who gets the highest score has to move their counter first.
If you want to turn on the computer, look for the round, lack power button and press it once.
If you trying to turn off the computer, Look around your keyboard until you find a round, lack power button. After you had found the button press it once to turn the device off
Hold the handles of the scissors and cut along the dotted line, making sure you don’t hurt yourself.
Hold the handles of the scissors by putting your fingers in, Cut along the dotted line making sure you don't hurt yourself
Before you start mixing the ingredients, switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.
Before you manage to mix the ingredients, Switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.
Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, being careful not to get any glue on your clothes.
Take off the lid of your glue stick, Rub the glue on the tab, As you do this be careful not to get it on your clothes
When you have planted your seed, pick up the pot and move it it near to a window where it will get lots of sunlight.
Once you planted the seed, pick up the pot and move it near a window where it can get lots of sunlight
This week my writing class have been learning to rewrite paragraphs or steps by making them easier to read or do and making it more sense. This doc help me with my writing because when I look back at my pass writing I can see the mistakes and rewrite it.

Wednesday 2 November 2016

Testing practise

WALT: understand improper and mixed fractions fractions


Last week my group and I have been working on a presentation that has equations. This presentation will help us improve our maths and other things we have never heard of. The presentation is about my decimals, fractions, time tables, predictions,Measurements and heaps more. This google presentation has improve my maths for the past few weeks.