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Wednesday, 18 March 2015

camp story.

WALT:organise my ideas into paragraphs and link them together .
Have you people been to camp at school before? The year five and six has had camp at school it was on wednesday the eleventh of march. Come on and lets talk about camp.


At first all the groups had to go to their camp leader our one was Mr Backsondine we had to go to the hall and listen to Mr Burt’s story.There was six groups including us and they were Real dealz, , Matapono e, the commitments, Honest squad and lucky last All stars they were listening too. Our team was called true crew.


The first thing we had to start on was top town but it is not really called  top town it is called killer zone.We had to verse real dealz there was heaps of activities but once we finished our activities we go to this flag and sing our chant. Can you guys guess who won true crew won (us).


The next thing we did was cooking the boys and to go with whaia saf and eat at Omaru creek. The girls were lucky because we cooked cookies with miss garden. Once we finished we had lunch and we ate cookies with milk it was really nice.

I was so excited when we started camp and I will always like the part when we will go and do jump jam. It was much cooler when we did the skates.

I have learned how to organise my ideas and put them in paragraphs and link them together and i even know how to do three body paragraphs.
 my rubric was marked by ukura.

1 comment:

  1. Hi presayus
    you got great writing about camp.

    from penny

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