Egg friend race recount

WALT: Think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

Well today was a pretty weird day for room six . It was a mini friend that we shared between our partner and we had to look after it. So we took it to our park and did a race, it was a egg friend race that we did for our experiment.

This little friend i am introducing is an egg and her name was preggy. My partner Talita drawed her face and the egg had a smile with one tooth out and had small eyes and a small nose. We had just got our little friend  like the rest of our team mates in our classroom. But my partner was really acting like it was a human being i was just like let's cook it and eat it.

Once we got to the park we got a little traveller machine that we all had to put our egg on without touching it.  It was a spoon. First my partner was racing she risk her life and did it the hard way but once she came back she said it was very difficult so i got nervous. I didn't look at my egg until I reached the end, once i got there i had just realized my partner cracked it. Because she told me right there but we weren't the only ones who did there were two groups that cracked there's too.

I still remember how difficult it was for my partner and i how we weren't aloud to touch it and other difficult rules . I bet my partner was really shocked because she wanted to take really good care but she found it difficult because she tooked the risk and it cracked.  It was difficult for me and easy because  I made it past without dropping it i also had butterflies in my stomach and the difficulty was trying to not crack it.

For our egg race was really difficult and i had heaps of feeling when we did the egg race. Butterflies is what I get for when I am nervous about how difficult it is going to be when I am doing the race. I did it really steady because it might drop again so to me and my partner we found it really hard.

I have learned how to do punctuation and learned how to put more detail into it and making sure it it pushes the reader to read on and find out more about my story. The task was asking me to think about my reader and purpose by planning my recount.